We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Holly you have lots of interesting adjectives in your recount making it interesting reading. You are working towards correctly placing capital letters and full stops. Great writing.
To add more information to the end part of your story. For example "It was fun because...."
To continue to work on correct placement of capitals and full stops.