We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer
picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full
stops and capital letters
Success Criteria:
· In my writing I will
have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have
started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Teacher Assessment:
Holly you have lots of interesting
adjectives in your recount making it interesting reading. You are working towards correctly placing capital letters and full stops. Great writing.
Next Step:
To add more information to the end part of your story. For example "It was fun because...."
To continue to work on correct placement of capitals and full stops.
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