WALT: Persuade the school to agree with our idea.
This was used for a speech By the way.
Sofia: Hi I’m Sofia.
Devon : Hi my name is Devon
Holly:Hey I’m Holly!
Sofia P1: Holly, Devon & I have made a model of a treehouse. We put in tons of thought in our work. I think we should have this in the new school because people would have fun working up in the treehouse.
Holly p1: AS Sofia said we have made a model of a treehouse . We thought about the safety long and hard. We tried to make everything stable and safe. We thought this idea would be fantastic to have in the new school.
Devon p1: I think the school should have a tree house because it’s fun,can remove energy and can be the coolest thing ever! We have been working on a model of the tree house and hopefully we it in the school.
By Devon,Holly and Sofia